1.                  Descriptive paragraph

2.                  300-500 words

your dream family

a person you admire

a place you feel safe

         WRITING 3

A Place You Feel Safe

My name is Evi lutfiani, I am going to tell you which one the best place that I feel safe?. Exactly my village (Suryamataram Village) or my birthplace, where I was born in the safe place. I can feel safe in the place itself (I mean my village), the place itself, has the fresh air, has the comfortable condition, so many person who live in the place itself, of course feel comfortable and the people who live around of the place are so nice, so that's why I can feel safe in this place, my village is very broad and has many tree, the type of the tree, the size of the tree that small, big, short, high and etc. Has many the type of the fruits, such as banana fruits, mango fruits, orange fruits, coconut fruits, pineapple fruits, watermelon fruits, papaya fruits and etc. So every moon the people who live in the place itself can eat so many fruits in the garden fruit, we just take in the garden not buy in the market, so this is the excess from my village and people who live in the place itself feel safe, comfortable and feel enough with the results of their own crops. My village has a grassy place, no pollution, so many flowers, this is a part of my village that has a grassy place, that’s the important things, the place that has a grassy place of course there is no pollution or free from pollution, and the animal farm can eat in the grass grassy every time. So I can take conclusion from the text above, the beautiful place is a place that you feel safe, that can make us feels comfortable, that has a beautiful views, has the fresh air, safe condition, there is no pollution and the people who live around of the place are so nice.

LUDFIAE EVYANY

Aku adalah kata yang terlahir dari hati dan pikiranmu, kata yang membentuk kalimat-kalimat indahmu dan menjadi sebuah cerita. Aku ingin berteman agar pemaknaanku jelas dan kau bumbuhi aku dengan beragam tanda baca, hingga akupun lebih mudah untuk dipahami. Kau adalah pena yang melukis kata-kata itu diatas selembar kertas, tintamu penuh warna, dan kalimatmu sangat beragam, tulisan itu berliku dengan penuh keindahan. Bagaimana jadinya kamu tanpa adanya abjad yang membentuk kalimat-kalimatmu, mungkin dirimu hanya mampu melukis bentuk.
Dan aku harus berusaha memaknai setiap bentuk yang kau buat. Aku mampu melukiskan dirimu asalkan kau jujur dalam menciptakan diriku untuk mendeskripsikan dirimu. Aku sering kali kau tutupi dan kau simpan rapat-rapat dan kadang kala kau umbar-umbar diriku yang tak tahu kejujurannya. Selembar kertas itu adalah rumah bagi kita, disitulah sejarah kita diukir dan dimuseumkan, disitulah kita menyatu, kadang kita rapi kadang kita kasat kusut dan adakalanya kita penuh noda dan seringkali kita bersih tanpa coret-coretan ataupun pemutih yang hendak menutupi kesalahan namun tetap saja meninggalkan bekas. Ada banyak kertas yang telah kita tempati dan setiap kertas memiliki cerita masing-masing tentang kita. aku tak tahu kita telah berada dihalaman keberapa? Yang kutahu kertas itu telah menebal dan menyatu dalam satu sampul yaitu kebahagiaan.
‪KANNUR    

selasa, 28 oktober 2014 04.41 pm
Aku masih ingat dengan apa yang pernah kau sampaikan kepadaku,
yeah, sedikit percakapan itu membuatmu sedikit bercerita padaku.
dunia luar itu ibarat sebuah buku yang harus dibuka lembar demi lembar, dan mencatatkan petualangan kita bagaimana kisah perjalanan hidup kita dalam setiap halaman demi halaman, dituliskan satu atau lebih judul dan dari judul itulah cerita kita dimulai dan berkembang.

smoking

-       Meeting 8

-       Explain Why Teens Smoke Cigarettes

Smoking is a major health problem that is very alarming nowadays especially among teenagers. Though most people know that smoking is bad for their health, but they are even more who consume. Smoking is very popular among students in high school and is commonly done among the students, especially among teenagers. Even high school kids and underneath too much. Smoking of any aspect appears to be no bright side. Teens are active smokers can cause a lot of problems and severe consequences for the health, psychological and even his future.

The following factors is the reason why teens smoke :

The first, Imitate adults, seeing the bigger her smoking makes the adolescent affected and want to do the same so that it becomes a habit that is difficult to remove. The second, family problems, a teenager whose family conditions are not good then they will tend to stress thinking about it, to vent his frustration usually they do things that are less good as smoking. The third, the attitude of curiosity, surely someone in their teens has a high curiosity, they always want to know how it can be beneficial to him or vice versa and they showed their curiosity by conducting an experiment. The fourth, the response to peer pressure, peers in their environment greatly affect an adolescent who has not smoke, because friends will always affect to smoking because smoking is usually if someone is not considered unmanly or cowardly when it is a wrong perception. The fifth, addictive effects of nicotine, the main compounds found in tobacco is an addictive substance, nicotine addiction and the other makes. Once teens start smoking, they always feel addicted to continue the habit so difficult to stop. The sixth, consider cigarettes may increase the ability of many teenagers who become smokers with the mistaken belief that smoking can improve the academic performance of the school is still a lot of teenagers are smoking. This misperception could be from cigarette advertising. The seventh, feel great, most teenage boys and women consider smoking as a way that they look great and cool, but that such a belief is not true. And the last, in order to appear more stylish look, with youth smoking considers himself more and more stylish so he thinks it's easier to seduce the opposite sex. Finally, the eight factors above are the more common causes of how people start smoking is addictive and hard to stop it.

Well that’s all about my expository text,’’ why teens smoke cigarette’’. Thank You :)

Name    : EVI LUTFIANI

1.                     Descriptive paragraph

2.                   300-500 words

your dream family

a person you admire

a place you feel safe

         WRITING 3

A Place You Feel Safe

My name is Evi lutfiani, I am going to tell you which one the best place that I feel safe?. Exactly my village (Suryamataram Village) or my birthplace, where I was born in the safe place. I can feel safe in the place itself (I mean my village), the place itself, has the fresh air, has the comfortable condition, so many person who live in the place itself, of course feel comfortable and the people who live around of the place are so nice, so that's why I can feel safe in this place, my village is very broad and has many tree, the type of the tree, the size of the tree that small, big, short, high and etc. Has many the type of the fruits, such as banana fruits, mango fruits, orange fruits, coconut fruits, pineapple fruits, watermelon fruits, papaya fruits and etc. So every moon the people who live in the place itself can eat so many fruits in the garden fruit, we just take in the garden not buy in the market, so this is the excess from my village and people who live in the place itself feel safe, comfortable and feel enough with the results of their own crops. My village has a grassy place, no pollution, so many flowers, this is a part of my village that has a grassy place, that’s the important things, the place that has a grassy place of course there is no pollution or free from pollution, and the animal farm can eat in the grass grassy every time. So I can take conclusion from the text above, the beautiful place is a place that you feel safe, that can make us feels comfortable, that has a beautiful views, has the fresh air, safe condition, there is no pollution and the people who live around of the place are so nice.

Name : Evi Lutfiani

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WRITING III

‘’If I Could Go Back In Time’’

Orientation	If I could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would I go? Why? so, I just use specific reasons and details to support My choice. Travelling time ["Time travel is" or "Traveling back in time is" are more natural] is a fantasy that numerous people have had. If I could choose to travel where I want in the past, I would go back to repair that I have done before.
Complication	I had to do something with a good job, more cautious, prepare yourself before doing activities and others, short stories when I was elementary school, I followed the contest class and it required, in fact I do not want to follow the contest, because I think that I can not, I might think that I'm stupid, but I'm not stupid too, and eventually all my friends to follow the contest, they are usually visible, able to follow the contest, why I am not join? End up with a strong conviction, I followed the contest, I have to waste time lazing, relaxing, and etc. Because I had to work hard, so that I can win, every day after coming home from school, I learned, and it was contest time. I was not sure if I will be winner and get a prize, finally I was just let go, and go back to the beginning, that I'm not sure. Two days later, the announcement of the contest, it was mentioned my name, and I champion to three, I'm very happy and proud. From here I was starting to think, that we do something with conviction and earnest, or preparation in our self before, then we can pass it.
Resolution	So, the main point of my conclusion if I could go back in time I just want to be someone who is without making mistakes, being good people, just doing be better, and I wish that I can be better than now. Doing what must be done, take care when doing something before, always keep self with perfectly. Say what must be said that there is no regrets in the future or doing something well that there is no regrets in the future later.