Sabtu, 10 Januari 2015



1.                  Descriptive paragraph
2.                  300-500 words
your dream family
a person you admire
a place you feel safe

         WRITING 3
A Place You Feel Safe
My name is Evi lutfiani, I am going to tell you which one the best place that I feel safe?. Exactly my village (Suryamataram Village) or my birthplace, where I was born in the safe place. I can feel safe in the place itself (I mean my village), the place itself, has the fresh air, has the comfortable condition, so many person who live in the place itself, of course feel comfortable and the people who live around of the place are so nice, so that's why I can feel safe in this place, my village is very broad and has many tree, the type of the tree, the size of the tree that small, big, short, high and etc. Has many the type of the fruits, such as banana fruits, mango fruits, orange fruits, coconut fruits, pineapple fruits, watermelon fruits, papaya fruits and etc. So every moon the people who live in the place itself can eat so many fruits in the garden fruit, we just take in the garden not buy in the market, so this is the excess from my village and people who live in the place itself feel safe, comfortable and feel enough with the results of their own crops. My village has a grassy place, no pollution, so many flowers, this is a part of my village that has a grassy place, that’s the important things, the place that has a grassy place of course there is no pollution or free from pollution, and the animal farm can eat in the grass grassy every time. So I can take conclusion from the text above, the beautiful place is a place that you feel safe, that can make us feels comfortable, that has a beautiful views, has the fresh air, safe condition, there is no pollution and the people who live around of the place are so nice.


LUDFIAE EVYANY
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1.                   Descriptive paragraph 2.                   300-500 words your dream family a person you admire a place yo...