IDENTIFYING PARAGRAPH WRITING

DEVELOP BY EVI LUDFIANI

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WRITING 3

ü The theme in my narrative paragraph    : [NICE EXPERIENCE]

NICE EXPERIENCE

My name is Evi Ludfiani, I had an experience that can not to be forgotten, of the things that makes me laugh till that makes me feel embarrassed, so I will share my experience to all. When I was in junior high school, I was to follow the scouts in school  with my friend, I was very active with this activity, so I was chosen to be the head of my group , before the camp activities are held, every day I have to practice or learn at school and scout movement and it's very tiring. As a chairman I should give clear instructions and must prepare the ranks well. One day before the start of the camp activities, I and my group had to prepare the equipment for camping and learn how to set up a tent correctly, my group are very compact in cooperating. That morning, we went to the campsites at 07:30 am, because the campsites were so far from our school. Precisely at time 12:30 am, we arrive at the campsites, we had to take our luggage out of the car, after that we started working together again to set up a tent, in the campsites it was very crowded, everyone was wearing a brown shirt, they are looks very neat, that day everyone is busy with their respective duties. After completion of setting up a tent, because I as a head of the group then I divide my tasks to my group. The next day, is the day gathering of all members of the group, I was embarrassed because I was a very little one. All of my new friends thought that I was not a head of the group, they make fun of me, but it's not a problem for me, after that I had to go back to the tent and give information for tomorrow activity. The next day, at the time  06:00 am,  we all should already gathered on the field to carry equipment such as spoons, plates, etc, it is very embarrassing, but it was also very amazing, because we had to walk and sing a song and to hit at the gear we brought, everyone laughs along the way, we all looks like crazy person. It was very silly, but we were all very happy, no one is looking sad at that time, because all the people I see they are laughing, we all walked through the gardens and fields, we also have to look for firewood for the bonfire party and we also had to pass through deep mud carrying firewood that bonfire party and we also had to pass through deep mud carrying firewood that we get, because it was so slippery, finally I fell from the mud and all of them are looked at me and laughed at me, then  I laughed also, but it was fun. Precisely 13:30 am, we arrived at each tent and continue with lunch, and then we have to follow the race, it was very tiring, we did not have time to rest, the race begins, before we never thought that it would win, but it all happened because my group win, I'm happy, we are happy together,  that I could prove,  I could be a good chairman in leading members of my group. Finally, at the time 21:00 pm, all of group had to gather in the field and celebrate for the last day, this is very enjoyable. Finally, the next day is come, we were ready for come back to our school with  the win prizes, from this experience I can conclude that activity will make us add new knowledge , new spirit and new friends and so on, and when work together with the good then we will also get results be better. Thank you for me to tell you about my experience.

IDENTIFYING	NICE EXPERIENCE
Introductory  Paragraph	My name is Evi Ludfiani, I had an experience that can not to be forgotten, of the things that makes me laugh till that makes me feel embarrassed, so I will share my experience to all. When I was in junior high school, I was to follow the scouts in school  with my friend, I was very active with this activity, so I was chosen to be the head of my group , before the camp activities are held, every day I have to practice or learn at school and scout movement and it's very tiring. As a chairman I should give clear instructions and must prepare the ranks well.
(Body Paragraph)   (Orientation)	One day before the start of the camp activities, I and my group had to prepare the equipment for camping and learn how to set up a tent correctly, my group are very compact in cooperating. That morning, we went to the campsites at 07:30 am, because the campsites were so far from our school. Precisely at time 12:30 am, we arrive at the campsites, we had to take our luggage out of the car, after that we started working together again to set up a tent, in the campsites it was very crowded, everyone was wearing a brown shirt, they are looks very neat, that day everyone is busy with their respective duties. After completion of setting up a tent, because I as a head of the group then I divide my tasks to my group. The next day, is the day gathering of all members of the group, I was embarrassed because I was a very little one. All of my new friends thought that I was not a head of the group, they make fun of me, but it's not a problem for me, after that I had to go back to the tent and give information for tomorrow activity. The next day, at the time  06:00 am,  we all should already gathered on the field to carry equipment such as spoons, plates, etc, it is very embarrassing, but it was also very amazing, because we had to walk and sing a song and to hit at the gear we brought, everyone laughs along the way, we all looks like crazy person. It was very silly, but we were all very happy, no one is looking sad at that time, because all the people I see they are laughing, we all walked through the gardens and fields, we also have to look for firewood for the bonfire party and we also had to pass through deep mud carrying firewood that we get, because it was so slippery, finally I fell from the mud and all of them are looked at me and laughed at me, then  I laughed also, but it was fun. Precisely 13:30 am, we arrived at each tent and continue with lunch, and then we have to follow the race, it was very tiring, we did not have time to rest, the race begins, before we never thought that it would win, but it all happened because my group win, I'm happy, we are happy together,  that I could prove,  I could be a good chairman in leading members of my group. Finally, at the time 21:00 pm, all of group had to gather in the field and celebrate for the last day, this is very enjoyable.
Concluding Paragraph/Coda	Finally, the next day is come, we were ready for come back to our school with  the win prizes, from this experience I can conclude that activity will make us add new knowledge , new spirit and new friends and so on, and when work together with the good then we will also get results be better. Thank you for me to tell you about my experience.

DIRECT

a.       Red            : introduction

b.       Blue           : plot

c.       Orange       : [The character of my writing is I and all of my friends]

d.       Brown        : setting  [in the campsites]

e.       Purple        : climax

f.         Green        : conclusion

g.       Blue           : setting, time, place

ü Your writing must have purpose      :My purpose is we must be strong to do something and must confident, believe that we can do anything and keep to work together to make the best group.

ü Use clear and understandable language.

ü You can use a pronoun "I" in your narrative writing.

ü Pay attention on text organizing structure.

ü Underline your topic sentence (if any).